(I have changed the idea of Anti-Kwami.)
Very little is known about the nature of Anti-Kwami other than what follows. Anti-Kwami are powerless on their own, but exist in the shadows. They can only float and cannot be seen on film. However, if their respective Kwami lets them "help" them then the real danger occurs. The Anti-Kwami will then have complete control over the Kwami. They are parasites. If that isn't bad enough, then they can manifest a human form as well as manipulate the shadows they resided in. While like this they can even corrupt other Miraculous to take those Kwami's powers as well, and while a human will dilute a Kwami's pow
TLoAM Finale A New Beginning by GoodVibeEnjoyer, literature
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TLoAM Finale A New Beginning
A few days have passed since Rittsi left. The Butterfly miraculous was returned to Master Fu, Gabriel was restored when the akuma were purified, everything was back to normal. Ryzen, however, had an odd feeling in his gut since that day. He didn't know why, but he felt bad for Rittsi.
"Kanniu? Is it justified?"
"What is Ryzen?"
"To feel bad for Rittsi."
"O-oh... I-I don't think I'm the person to ask about that..."
"Why? do you hate him?"
"N-no! I never hated him... I understood WHY he did what he did... and I tried to make him smile at least a bit but... he just never looked at me... Ryzen... is... is something wrong with me?"
"What? no! I th
TLoAM Pt. 8 The Final Conflict by GoodVibeEnjoyer, literature
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TLoAM Pt. 8 The Final Conflict
Rittsi had made some progress with the foxes. They trusted him enough that when he offered food they would take it. When he reached to pet them, however, they backed off. Well, progress was progress. Suddenly he heard a twig snap behind him.
"You did better this time. didn't notice you until you landed."
"Wait how did you know it was me specifically?"
"Who else knows this place?"
"... Fair enough. I actually wanted you ask you something."
"Okay. Ask away."
"What is Awakening?"
"... Kanniu told you about that?"
"He brought it up but nothing else."
"It's dangerous. You have to be in perfect sync with your Kwami, or at least near perfect. None o
TLoAM Pt. 7 An Ancient Rematch by GoodVibeEnjoyer, literature
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TLoAM Pt. 7 An Ancient Rematch
"... and that's all you need to know. If you think i lied about anything you an just run it by Kanniu. He was there too."
"I'm... sorry about your parents..."
"I'm over it. I killed Yokai in the end... but... You may have to deal with her."
"Why?"
"Hawkmoth made me get her scythe so she could be revived. Look, I haven't killed you all because I don't want to. This is a new time and I shouldn't even be here... Yokai is a psychopath. She kills because she enjoys it. If you face her... You can only hope to stall until I get there."
"Wait, why would you help us?"
"I already let Hawkmoth know I may kill her. It will be a good test of my weapon. Yo
TLoAM Pt. 6 The Past Meets The Present by GoodVibeEnjoyer, literature
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TLoAM Pt. 6 The Past Meets The Present
Rittsi dropped a broken scythe to the ground.
"here. The scythe."
"why is it broken?"
"well besides the test of time, i broke it."
"why?!"
"..."
"... oh... right... the past..."
"You know for being rich you are pretty stupid Gabriel."
"w-what?!"
"I'm not stupid. your voice, body shape, and eyes are the exact same."
"how did you-"
"I'm. Not. Stupid. I even know who Ladybug and Chat Noir are."
"really? who!"
"Wouldn't you like to know. It doesn't matter. I'm not going to approach them and take it. I will fight them, then take it after I win. the addition of two extra war-... fighters... makes this a bit difficult. I'm going for a walk again."
"
TLoAM Pt. 5 A Cold Reunion by GoodVibeEnjoyer, literature
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TLoAM Pt. 5 A Cold Reunion
Rittsi was staring at a tree. It was about five feet taller than the trees around it, and was in the middle of a clearing.
"This is it... this was where it happened... where I died."
He placed his hand on the tree. From his memory, it was right where he had died. He figured it must have sprouted out from his remains. A symbol of the end of an age of war.
"... What is the point of such things when nothing has changed... I'll bet my spare swords are still somewhere nearby."
Rittsi spent a good sixteen minutes looking but eventually he found one sword. A rusty, bent, old sword. It was something at least. The handle was loose and damaged, and the
TLoAM Pt. 4 A Sinister Revival by GoodVibeEnjoyer, literature
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TLoAM Pt. 4 A Sinister Revival
Hawkmoth was very upset. While his akuma were steadily becoming more powerful, Ladybug and Chat Noir always seemed to be even stronger. The way things were progressing he would never acquire their miraculous.
"Nooru... if there is any stories or secrets about the miraculous you haven't told me, I would recommend you tell me now. Preferably one that is powerful."
Nooru was out of options. He had sworn to never speak of this unless absolutely needed... and he was deeply afraid of what would happen if he didn't.
"W-well there is a story and an ability... T-The Dark Angel..."
"Dark Angel?"
"A Miraculous user gone rogue. His strength was beyond hu
TLoAM Pt. 3 Enter: Kunin by GoodVibeEnjoyer, literature
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TLoAM Pt. 3 Enter: Kunin
The house was quiet. The adults were out of the house. A girl sleeps soundly. This girls name is Kunin. As she awakes she stretches happily.
"Its a nice change to wake up BEFORE the alarm goes off for once..."
She turned to look at her alarm. It read 9:53. 9:53...
"Wait... 9:53?! I'm late!"
Kunin threw her covers off and hurried to get dressed. She just grabbed her stuff, grabbed a gronola bar, and was out the door. This happens more times than she likes to admit. She forgets to set her alarm, and she has to rush out the door. her parents aren't around much as her dad is in the navy and her mom worked all night and most of the morning. All th
TLoAM Pt. 2 Enter: Ryzen by GoodVibeEnjoyer, literature
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TLoAM Pt. 2 Enter: Ryzen
Hundreds of years passed since the death of the Dark Angel. His armor was given to his family, and his miraculous was taken back to the armory. As the years passed the story of the Dark Angel became an old folk tale, a myth, a legend. The Kwami knew the story very well but all agreed to never speak of it unless absolutely needed. Kanniu had gone from a positive, energetic, optimistic Kwami to a shy, quiet, and seemingly depressed Kwami. The armor was passed down for many years, until the knowledge of who originally owned it faded and it ended up in a museum in Paris, France when it was sold. Present day is where this part begins.
~~~~~~~~~~~~
TLoAM Pt. 1 A Warriors Death by GoodVibeEnjoyer, literature
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TLoAM Pt. 1 A Warriors Death
The world is in chaos. The two sides in a grand war now are united against a common enemy. One neither of them had expected. A war general gone rouge. He had developed several names for himself. The Silent Death, The Deadly Shadow, or the one most called him, The Dark Angel. The fallen savior. One day he just snapped and began killing anyone with a miraculous, shattering them, and then collecting the shards, keeping them on him at all times. His friends, his family, everyone he knew, left behind for an unknown reason. The final battle is where our story begins.
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(I have changed the idea of Anti-Kwami.)
Very little is known about the nature of Anti-Kwami other than what follows. Anti-Kwami are powerless on their own, but exist in the shadows. They can only float and cannot be seen on film. However, if their respective Kwami lets them "help" them then the real danger occurs. The Anti-Kwami will then have complete control over the Kwami. They are parasites. If that isn't bad enough, then they can manifest a human form as well as manipulate the shadows they resided in. While like this they can even corrupt other Miraculous to take those Kwami's powers as well, and while a human will dilute a Kwami's pow
TLoAM Finale A New Beginning by GoodVibeEnjoyer, literature
Literature
TLoAM Finale A New Beginning
A few days have passed since Rittsi left. The Butterfly miraculous was returned to Master Fu, Gabriel was restored when the akuma were purified, everything was back to normal. Ryzen, however, had an odd feeling in his gut since that day. He didn't know why, but he felt bad for Rittsi.
"Kanniu? Is it justified?"
"What is Ryzen?"
"To feel bad for Rittsi."
"O-oh... I-I don't think I'm the person to ask about that..."
"Why? do you hate him?"
"N-no! I never hated him... I understood WHY he did what he did... and I tried to make him smile at least a bit but... he just never looked at me... Ryzen... is... is something wrong with me?"
"What? no! I th
TLoAM Pt. 8 The Final Conflict by GoodVibeEnjoyer, literature
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TLoAM Pt. 8 The Final Conflict
Rittsi had made some progress with the foxes. They trusted him enough that when he offered food they would take it. When he reached to pet them, however, they backed off. Well, progress was progress. Suddenly he heard a twig snap behind him.
"You did better this time. didn't notice you until you landed."
"Wait how did you know it was me specifically?"
"Who else knows this place?"
"... Fair enough. I actually wanted you ask you something."
"Okay. Ask away."
"What is Awakening?"
"... Kanniu told you about that?"
"He brought it up but nothing else."
"It's dangerous. You have to be in perfect sync with your Kwami, or at least near perfect. None o
TLoAM Pt. 7 An Ancient Rematch by GoodVibeEnjoyer, literature
Literature
TLoAM Pt. 7 An Ancient Rematch
"... and that's all you need to know. If you think i lied about anything you an just run it by Kanniu. He was there too."
"I'm... sorry about your parents..."
"I'm over it. I killed Yokai in the end... but... You may have to deal with her."
"Why?"
"Hawkmoth made me get her scythe so she could be revived. Look, I haven't killed you all because I don't want to. This is a new time and I shouldn't even be here... Yokai is a psychopath. She kills because she enjoys it. If you face her... You can only hope to stall until I get there."
"Wait, why would you help us?"
"I already let Hawkmoth know I may kill her. It will be a good test of my weapon. Yo
TLoAM Pt. 6 The Past Meets The Present by GoodVibeEnjoyer, literature
Literature
TLoAM Pt. 6 The Past Meets The Present
Rittsi dropped a broken scythe to the ground.
"here. The scythe."
"why is it broken?"
"well besides the test of time, i broke it."
"why?!"
"..."
"... oh... right... the past..."
"You know for being rich you are pretty stupid Gabriel."
"w-what?!"
"I'm not stupid. your voice, body shape, and eyes are the exact same."
"how did you-"
"I'm. Not. Stupid. I even know who Ladybug and Chat Noir are."
"really? who!"
"Wouldn't you like to know. It doesn't matter. I'm not going to approach them and take it. I will fight them, then take it after I win. the addition of two extra war-... fighters... makes this a bit difficult. I'm going for a walk again."
"
TLoAM Pt. 5 A Cold Reunion by GoodVibeEnjoyer, literature
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TLoAM Pt. 5 A Cold Reunion
Rittsi was staring at a tree. It was about five feet taller than the trees around it, and was in the middle of a clearing.
"This is it... this was where it happened... where I died."
He placed his hand on the tree. From his memory, it was right where he had died. He figured it must have sprouted out from his remains. A symbol of the end of an age of war.
"... What is the point of such things when nothing has changed... I'll bet my spare swords are still somewhere nearby."
Rittsi spent a good sixteen minutes looking but eventually he found one sword. A rusty, bent, old sword. It was something at least. The handle was loose and damaged, and the
TLoAM Pt. 4 A Sinister Revival by GoodVibeEnjoyer, literature
Literature
TLoAM Pt. 4 A Sinister Revival
Hawkmoth was very upset. While his akuma were steadily becoming more powerful, Ladybug and Chat Noir always seemed to be even stronger. The way things were progressing he would never acquire their miraculous.
"Nooru... if there is any stories or secrets about the miraculous you haven't told me, I would recommend you tell me now. Preferably one that is powerful."
Nooru was out of options. He had sworn to never speak of this unless absolutely needed... and he was deeply afraid of what would happen if he didn't.
"W-well there is a story and an ability... T-The Dark Angel..."
"Dark Angel?"
"A Miraculous user gone rogue. His strength was beyond hu
TLoAM Pt. 3 Enter: Kunin by GoodVibeEnjoyer, literature
Literature
TLoAM Pt. 3 Enter: Kunin
The house was quiet. The adults were out of the house. A girl sleeps soundly. This girls name is Kunin. As she awakes she stretches happily.
"Its a nice change to wake up BEFORE the alarm goes off for once..."
She turned to look at her alarm. It read 9:53. 9:53...
"Wait... 9:53?! I'm late!"
Kunin threw her covers off and hurried to get dressed. She just grabbed her stuff, grabbed a gronola bar, and was out the door. This happens more times than she likes to admit. She forgets to set her alarm, and she has to rush out the door. her parents aren't around much as her dad is in the navy and her mom worked all night and most of the morning. All th
TLoAM Pt. 2 Enter: Ryzen by GoodVibeEnjoyer, literature
Literature
TLoAM Pt. 2 Enter: Ryzen
Hundreds of years passed since the death of the Dark Angel. His armor was given to his family, and his miraculous was taken back to the armory. As the years passed the story of the Dark Angel became an old folk tale, a myth, a legend. The Kwami knew the story very well but all agreed to never speak of it unless absolutely needed. Kanniu had gone from a positive, energetic, optimistic Kwami to a shy, quiet, and seemingly depressed Kwami. The armor was passed down for many years, until the knowledge of who originally owned it faded and it ended up in a museum in Paris, France when it was sold. Present day is where this part begins.
~~~~~~~~~~~~
TLoAM Pt. 1 A Warriors Death by GoodVibeEnjoyer, literature
Literature
TLoAM Pt. 1 A Warriors Death
The world is in chaos. The two sides in a grand war now are united against a common enemy. One neither of them had expected. A war general gone rouge. He had developed several names for himself. The Silent Death, The Deadly Shadow, or the one most called him, The Dark Angel. The fallen savior. One day he just snapped and began killing anyone with a miraculous, shattering them, and then collecting the shards, keeping them on him at all times. His friends, his family, everyone he knew, left behind for an unknown reason. The final battle is where our story begins.
__________________________________________________________________________________
TLoAM Pt. 1 A Warriors Death by GoodVibeEnjoyer, literature
Literature
TLoAM Pt. 1 A Warriors Death
The world is in chaos. The two sides in a grand war now are united against a common enemy. One neither of them had expected. A war general gone rouge. He had developed several names for himself. The Silent Death, The Deadly Shadow, or the one most called him, The Dark Angel. The fallen savior. One day he just snapped and began killing anyone with a miraculous, shattering them, and then collecting the shards, keeping them on him at all times. His friends, his family, everyone he knew, left behind for an unknown reason. The final battle is where our story begins.
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